Talk:Christian Medical College, Ludhiana/GA2
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet (talk · contribs) 14:13, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
Unfortunately, this article is currently too far from the GA criteria for a full review. The article has significant breadth concerns, based on its extremely short sections with little in-depth discussion of the topic; for instance, the Academics section doesn't discuss anything that makes CMC's education worth noting (how do they approach medical education? how do students fund their education, and how does that number compare to averages? what do several of those acronyms mean?), while the Rankings section is a single sentence that doesn't contextualize what it means for a university to be ranked in those spots on those lists. At the same time, the article strays into irrelevant details without focusing on the main topic (The hospital's psychiatry department is combating the substance abuse crisis in Punjab. The department offers de-addiction services and has found that most patients are between 20 and 30 years old and are addicted to anything from cough syrup and heroin to cocaine and alcohol
). The prose also fails GA prose requirements, with parts of it difficult to read or understand (India Today ranked the college 10th for private medical colleges in the country with lowest fees for the entire course duration of ₹4 million (US$50,000)
).
I see this article has failed GAN in the past. Before checking the edit history to see significant expansions, I assumed it must have been renominated without changes, because the issues raised at the previous GAN are the same ones raised now. I recommend looking at other university GAs to see how to potentially improve this one to that level. Vaticidalprophet 14:13, 24 August 2023 (UTC)