Talk:Chinese cruiser Yangwei/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:36, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:36, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks - I'll be making any amendments you suggest in this review to the Chaoyong as well. I haven't nominated that one for GA yet, as I have concerns over the licencing for the image currently in the infobox (as well as all the images of the ship at Commons). Miyagawa (talk) 09:47, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
- Section 1;
- larger Ironclad warships; de-capitalize "I" in "Ironcald"
- Flat-iron gunboats; de-capitalize "F"
- along with a higher muzzle velocity main battery to attack larger,[2][3] more cumbersome foes – very similar to the principles of Jeune École; This sentence is a bit confusing. The dash must be unspaced em dash. Who is Jeune École? "more cumbersome foes" is a bit awkward.
- Why is the context of Chilean Navy brought in here? Please explain clearly. Is there is any agreement between the governments to use the ship's model or it was just copied?
- Charles Mitchell; some context on nationality and profession
- the exactly design -> the exact design
- Conversion for 5.1-inch guns; also remove -
- abbreviate units from second mention, in some case they are, but not in some. For example, 57 millimetres (2.2 in), 37 millimetres (1.5 in), 15.5 feet (4.7 m) etc.
- Section 2;
- Lead; all good
- All images are properly licensed.
- There is one dab link, please fix this.
- O% violation, well done.
- External links are fine.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:39, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:50, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: