Talk:Chillin (Wale song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 18:24, 23 August 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for taking this up Calvin999, but you had also reviewed the first nomination. Will it be fine for you to take up the second one? —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 09:35, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

I can't see why not. It was more than a year ago?  — Calvin999 09:37, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

I'm fine with it, was just making sure if there are any protocols. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 11:59, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

• is a 2009 song → is a song (you go on to say it was released in 2009)
• was written by a number of songwriters, → was composed by a number of songwriters, (written... songwriters is a bit receptive)
• speaks about → discusses
• What do you mean by "reference to go-go"?
• and samples → and contains two samples
• Provide a link to sample
• Some praised the collaboration and composition, while others criticized Wale and Gaga's contributions. → So the collab was praised and criticised for the same reason: that it's Wale and Gaga?
• Wale and Gaga's contributions. → This is a bit ambiguous. I think that's what is troubling me about the sentence as a whole.
• In the United Kingdom, "Chillin" reached number 12 on the UK Singles Chart, → I don't think you need to say both United Kingdom and UK Singles Chart.
• On incorporating this → On incorporating the
• worked on "Chillin" include → worked on "Chillin" included (Tense)
• Can electro-funk be added to the info box?
• Link sample in the composition section again
• opening with the line This how you → Missing quotation mark before 'This'
• Generally articles put Music video after Chart performance?
• One of Gaga's characteristic Great Danes also appears in the video wearing Beats by Dr. Dre headphones. → I think this needs some context. It took me a second to realise you are referring to "Poker Face".
• Linking of Pitchfork Media needs to be swapped from ref 24 to ref 10. And non-italics.
• HipHopDX and Sputnikmusic aren't usually italicised?
• Any info for a release table and the formats given the info in the info box?

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. Though I doubt you'll need that!  — Calvin999 15:19, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

Calvin999 sorry I had missed watchlisting the page. I have made the necessary changes now. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 13:42, 26 August 2015 (UTC)

Great. Pleased to pass this time around.  — Calvin999 16:06, 26 August 2015 (UTC)