Talk:Chikurubi Prison

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Fmalan in topic Needs a rewrite

Needs a rewrite edit

No doubt this is a noteworthy encyclopaedia entry, but in its current form it is written like a call to activism instead of a factual description.

Suggestions:

  • The body should be split into paragraphs, and should only report facts.
  • There should be more citations (if possible).
  • Moral judgements should not be part of the article.

- FMalan (talk) 14:31, 24 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

I created this as a stub, but haven't been back here for quite a while. The text that's been added since them looks to be a copyvio of this webpage, so I think we should revert back to my original. Hopefully someone with more knowledge on the subject can expand it further.