Talk:Check (Meek Mill song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing. – zmbro _{(talk) (cont)} 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments:

• Could we shorten "Encore, Los Angeles, CA" to "Encore (Los Angeles)"?

•  Comment: this is how it is stylized in the liner notes so can't it remain? --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• "Throughout the video" → "In the video"?
• "American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside handled the song's production, while they also co-wrote it with Mill." since this is the start of the body, how about ""Check" was produced by American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside, who co-wrote it with Meek Mill"? with links of course
• "Young Thug's 2014 track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)", which features Mill" → "Young Thug's Mill-featuring track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)" (2014)"

•  Done for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• Were these "series of tweets" of note?

•  Not done they are lyrics, even from the song. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• You can remove the 2015 from "On June 29, 2015,"
• "Def Pen" does not strike me as reliable. It honestly looks WP:SELFPUBLISHED
• Minor but wasn't Consequence still Consequence of Sound in 2015?

•  Done for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• "Sweeney said the song consists of "three synth notes and a huge beat"" this reads more like an actual description and not a reaction to it. I'd ditch it here or move it up to comp.

•  Partly done I remove the three synth notes from reception but kept huge beat, as that sounds like a review term. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• "Kevin Goddard depicted that Mill" don't think "depicted" is the right word here
• "and opined that it "should probably have opened the LP"" we can paraphrase this
• Do we know who directed the video during the initial shoot? Was it Jordan or was he brought in to finish it? I'd clarify this

•  Done for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• Is the Young M.A. freestyle notable?

• Yes, as there is significant coverage. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• I ran the bot to archive all the URLs but it looks like it missed ref 3

•  Done --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

• That's all I got. It's been cool reviewing someone other Kanye xP. Should be a GA in no time. – zmbro _{(talk) (cont)} 20:47, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

• Zmbro It has been fun working on articles for someone other than Kanye West too; this has now had the fixes implemented if you are ready to pass or not? --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass easy peasy – zmbro _{(talk) (cont)} 13:09, 27 February 2023 (UTC)