Talk:Charles XI of Sweden/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Kensplanet in topic GA Review

GA Review

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I am going to review this article. Kensplanet (talk) 17:34, 26 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Checkout the Good article criteria here.

(1). Well written:
1 (a). the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and  
1 (b). it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.  

(2). Factually accurate and verifiable:  
2 (a). it provides references to all sources of information, and at minimum contains a section dedicated to the attribution of those sources in accordance with the guide to layout;  
2 (b). at minimum, it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons; and  
2 (c). it contains no original research.  

(3). Broad in its coverage:  
3 (a). it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and  
3 (b). it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail  

(4). Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias.  

(5). Stable: it does not change significantly from day-to-day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.  

(6). Illustrated, if possible, by images:  
6 (a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content; and  
6 (b). images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions  

Comments

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  • Charles XI (Swedish: Karl XI, 24 November 1655old style – 5 April 1697old style
It's a bit difficult for a user like me to understand what old style means. Instead of old style, wh don't you directly put Julian Calender. Anyway, not a major problem since that is indicated by the footnote.
  • Charles XI was succeeded by the only son that reached adulthood, Charles XII, who made use of the well-trained army in battles throughout Europe.
Please copyedit this sentence.

I think the article satisfies good article criteria. The article will have to be more comprehensive for FA status. Good work for GA. I'll gladly promote this article. Thanks, Kensplanet (talk) 06:53, 27 September 2008 (UTC)Reply