Talk:Cephalic Carnage/GA1

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   "The band dubbed their style 'Rocky Mountain hydro-grind'. Cephalic Carnage is also known for its humorous songs." Why not, "The band, which dubbed their style 'Rocky Mountain hydro-grind', is also known for its humorous songs." ? "Rocky Mountain hydro-grind" 'sounds humorous,' and fits with the next sentence.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   The section Exploiting Dysfunction and Lucid Interval (2000–2004) is very short, need to be expanded.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   This article don't have images.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Expand that section and I'll see.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

I expanded that section a bit, but I don't have sufficient sources that provide more information. The early history of the band has not been documented in detail. So I fused the first 2 subsections into 1. I think it is ok.

I did search in Flickr, but all the pictures over there are copyrighted. There is not much I can do about this. However, GA criteria do not require images if there are no available. So this should not be problem.

I hope this is satisfactory :) --  LYKANTROP  ✉ 09:33, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Hmm, okay. Passed.--Cannibaloki 16:10, 21 July 2009 (UTC)