Talk:Bubbles (video game)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Kung Fu Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    Prose is a little choppy in some sections.
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  


Alright, after reviewing this article it's pretty solid and informative, but there's one thing holding me up on it: the prose. The way some sentences are feels too choppy, especially in the lead and even development and reception sections, making the article somewhat difficult to wade through. A light copyedit will probably solve the issue, it just needs it to flow better. Other than that no complaints about the article: it's another informative piece by you, which is always a good read.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 05:46, 1 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

I gave it a copy edit sweep, but admittedly I didn't change much. If that didn't address your concern, I can try to get some one else to give it a look. (Guyinblack25 talk 15:05, 1 July 2009 (UTC))Reply
Alright we look good to go, passing now.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 17:13, 1 July 2009 (UTC)Reply