Talk:Buangkok MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 04:08, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 17:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 17:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

@ZKang123 Here are my comments! Hope they can be addressed. Arconning (talk) 16:02, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

@Arconning: Responded.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

@ZKang123 Just one more issue, the title of the artwork is "Water, Nature & Contemporary". The lead says "Water, Nature and the Contemporary" Arconning (talk) 06:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 06:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

• Capitalize Line in mentions of North East line.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• The station will also serve an upcoming integrated development Sengkang Grand Residencies and a future bus interchange., add commas after development and Residencies.
  • Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• Civil Defence shelter, add comma at the end.
  • Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• An Art-in-Transit artwork Water, Nature and the Contemporary by Vincent Leow is displayed at this station., An Art-in-Transit artwork by Vincent Leow, Water, Nature & Contemporary, is displayed at this station.
  • Fixed. (at this point I note your love for commas though. Personally I don't really like overusing, but sure.) --ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Constructions

• re-developed, remove hyphen.

Delay in opening

• – Woodleigh and Buangkok – , replace endashes with emdashes and remove the spaces.
  • Personally stylistically I'm keeping them as endashes.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• "commercially viable",, remove comma.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• Lee quipped, add that at the end.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

White elephant incidents and station opening

• without issues., replace issues with either issue or any issues.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Details

• 5:45 am to 12:25 am, turn am to a.m..
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• road of Sengkang Central , add comma at the end.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• and two schools, add colon at the end.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• Civil Defence (CD) shelter:, replace colon with semicolon.

Artwork

• commentary of life, replace of with on.
  • Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
• Optional. fishes to fish.

Images

• Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.

Refs

• I would suggest linking the references without links, though a source is a source. Pass.
• Random source check: References 2, 15, and 30, are okay.
• Reference 44 has moved to a new location. Information is not on the current website provided.
• Earwig's fine, manual check same. Pass.

Misc

• No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic, neutral.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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