Talk:Brookville Tunnel/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Arsenikk in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 12:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

Comments:

  • Remember to state the country; Virginia is not a place commonly known by people outside the US. (fixed)
  • Per MOS, don't comma a month–year combination, only date–month–year (fixed, good advice, beyond GA scope)
  • "During the American Civil War..." Years should be included to provide context. Don't simply presume the reader knows when the American Civil War was. (I doubt the average non-American would know this, and even many Americans can't keep track of it). (fixed)
  • I have used the syntax |disp=s in one {{convert}} template to avoid a double parenthesis. (fixed)
  • Please remember to use endashes for page ranges. (fixed)
  • I have fixed a number of significant digit errors in the convert templates. (fixed)
  • The article states "Today, Interstate 64 passes over the cut that replaced the Brookville Tunnel." I have checked the reference and I cannot understand how this claim is supported.
  • Refs 6 and 12 are identical and should be merged using the name syntax; the same goes for 1 adn 26; 7 and 9; 25, 32 and 48; 28 and 30; 16 and 20, and perhaps others I may have overlooked.
  •   Done

Placing on hold. Arsenikk (talk) 12:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review Arsenikk! All the issues you have addressed should be fixed now. Thanks! MountainRail (talk) 22:51, 28 February 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for writing a good article! Arsenikk (talk) 08:42, 1 March 2013 (UTC)Reply