Talk:Broke (The Office)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Theleftorium in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nice job with the article. I made some changes to the article and here is my comments:

  • "Broke" is the twenty-third episode – should be "23rd" since the other numbers in the article aren't spelled out.
  • but Dunder Mifflin offers to buy his company it out
  • as Dunder Mifflin V.P. Charles Miner – spell out "V.P."
  • in the 18-49 age group – use an endash.
  • Add who Steve Martin is (ex. American actor Steve Martin).
  • (See also Bright Lights, Big City by Jay McInerney, whose first chapter is titled, "It's Six A.M. Do You Know Where You Are?") – Is this really necessary here?
  • Link CBS
  • like Charles brown-nosing to David Wallace and realizing Dwight is eccentric
  • The A.V. Club should be italicized

I'll put the article on hold so that you can fix this. :) Cheers, TheLeftorium 13:17, 17 May 2009 (UTC)Reply