Talk:Broad Street station (BMT Nassau Street Line)/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:20, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:20, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • The history section of the lead can definitely be longer than a sentence.
    •   Done
  • Can the track layout show the non-revenue tracks?
  • And be in the Station layout section instead?
  •   Done The layout does already show the non-revenue tracks, though. epicgenius (talk) 21:05, 1 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Can you add the pages of ref 5 that are used for this article? Issuu is just awful to use or navigate.
    •   Done
  • Refs 7 and 8 need |subscription=yes.
    •   Done but because |subscription=yes is outdated, |url-access=subscription is used instead. epicgenius (talk) 02:10, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Full citations for references in ref 10.
    •   Done
  • Renovations should be mentioned in the history section.
    •   Done
  • "entrances/exits" I would switch the / for "and".
  •   Done
  • Same thing for "located at Wall Street/Broadway and Wall Street/William Street," maybe Wall Street at Broadway and Wall Street at William Street?
  •   Done
  • "Two staircases to Broad Street between Exchange Place and Beaver Street;[15] a third on the southwestern corner of Exchange Place and Broad Street was closed and sealed." Replace the semicolon with "and" if all three were closed.
  • "exit-only staircase here" Here as in the station?
  • Any updates to the proposed elevators?

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:06, 24 April 2020 (UTC)Reply