Talk:Briggsdale (Columbus, Ohio)

Peer Review Comments

-Good information on the history. It's very detailed.
-The locations of the neighborhood might fit better under a Geography section.
-In the history section, not sure if I understand when you say "16 years his junior."
-Under the Briggsdale Methodist Church, cite the references for all of the dates you researched.
-What is the significance of the Briggsdale School?

Users: Kristiana Burgi and Andrew Love — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:304:CDD9:9090:4598:1F6E:41C:DD9A (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Instructor Comments No. 1

• Good Start
• I agree with Lisa, too much commentary on Family, but some of the information is useful.
• It is never mentioned that Briggsdale was named by Briggs - need to mention that.
• What is the Geography of Briggsdale? Boundaries? What neighborhoods are nearby?
• On Geography: I believe there is a more formalized historical boundary, but are there nearby businesses/churches with Briggsdale in the title? This would suggest larger commonly interpreted boundaries.
• Is there any signage?
• WorldCat@OSU Lists several City Directories that have various names in them of residents and businesses. May want to look at these for some more information.
• Briggsdale Apartments info is useful, but it needs to be under a residential subhead.
• Was there a Briggsdale Railroad Station on the Columbus and Xenia railroad?

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:42, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

Instructor Comments No. 2

Well-written

• Lead Section Needs Work
• Haven't updated it with current feedback
• Add Geography Section

Verifiable with no original research

• Good work here

Broad in its coverage

• Well done.

Neutral

• Be careful here, Example: Joseph M. Briggs was one of the most prominent and influential citizens of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio. It should read: Joseph M. Briggs was a prominent and influential citizen of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio By doing this you remove the opinion from it (passive vs. active voice).

Stable

• No comments yet.

Illustrated

• No Images, and it needs them.
• Also, see if you can add an info box.