Talk:Brian the Bachelor/GA1

GA Review

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Hello. I will be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

• In the text, a lot of the refs need to be placed in numerical order.
  • Done. – Ms. Sarita ^Confer 04:55, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
• "The scene at the dermatology clinic with Doug the pimple trying to drag Chris across the room to grab a gun and then Chris stabbing it with a needle first could be a reference to "Evil Dead II" when Ash Williams is being dragged across the cabin by his demon-possessed hand which is trying to get a meat cleaver but instead Ash stabs his hand and cuts it off before it reaches the cleaver." - this needs a reference or it is original research.
  • That wasn't in the article when it was nominated, but because my editing has been sporadic for a few weeks, I haven't been on hand to remove it. Qst (talk) 19:19, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
• Is there a more reliable source for the director and writer information? Maybe the show's official website or the DVDs?

That's it. The article will remain on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki♥311 21:09, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Everything else is done. Cheers Nikki. :) Qst (talk) 19:19, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

Great. Pass. :) Nikki♥311 23:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)