Talk:Breanna Stewart/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: EricEnfermero (talk · contribs) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)

I was happy to take a look at this article, but I notice pretty significant issues with prose. Most seriously, I removed a paragraph that appeared to be taken verbatim from the bio on her college team website. In addition to copyediting, the article needs to be thoroughly evaluated for other copyright issues. I will detail a bit more below. EricEnfermero (Talk) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)

The major issues

It seems that the nominator of this article has been inactive for some time. There are significant issues that won't be easily resolved within a few days, even if someone else were to pick up responsibility for addressing this review feedback. Here are the major issues that I noticed on a brief review; a full review isn't indicated right now.

• A copyright violation was removed from the Sophomore Year section.
• The lead is incomplete, with no college info other than the name of her school and that she enrolled in 2012.
• Grammar is inconsistent - a copyedit may help a great deal. I can provide examples if they would help someone.
• An inline source should appear after direct quotes.
• Some 2014-2015 information can probably be included by now.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

This can be renominated at any point if someone would like to pick it up. EricEnfermero (Talk) 09:21, 25 March 2015 (UTC)