Talk:Born Again (Third Day song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Lead/Infobox/Background

• No cover?
  • Christian labels usually don't bother to make a cover for anything beyond the first single, since they can just promote the single to radio and let people buy the song off of the album on iTunes. Toa Nidhiki05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Recorded in various locations Which ones?
  • Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• 52nd Grammy Awards - the Grammy Award for Best Gospel Song and... I don't think the hyphen is needed. Just use a colon.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• No need to link Third Day again.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:40, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• Join the two paragraphs. They're pretty short anyway.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• No need to link Lacey Mosley, ballad, folk music, alternative metal, and pop music again.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Don't capitalize "born" in "born again".
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• folk-flavored ballad... which Add a space before the ellipsis.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Citation 3 should be after "Flyleaf", not "and".
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• End the sentence after which beautifully features Lacey Mosley from Flyleaf.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Don't link Flyleaf again.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Reception

• chart week of June 13, 2009. Date-Month-Year is used for the references, so it should be used here.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:53, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Don't capitalize "No."
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:53, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Don't link the chart names again.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:53, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Live performances/Other uses/References

• All dates should be in DMY.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• At WinterJam#Winter Jam 2010, Pipe the link!
  • Whoops, done. Toa Nidhiki05
• Put the "other uses" sentence in another section, maybe the lead.
  • Good idea, done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Reference 12 should be in DMY.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
• Citations that have a chart search should have a note.
  • That was just a formatting mistake in the citation, which I fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Once these concerns have been addressed, I will pass the article. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Is it good now? Toa Nidhiki05 16:02, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

Yup, passing it now. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 00:59, 19 March 2012 (UTC)