Talk:Blueplate Lunch Counter and Soda Fountain/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 05:29, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this one. Seems like it had a delicious menu. APK hi :-) (talk) 05:29, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:32, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

• IMHO, this could all be condensed and it would move the bottom picture up a bit that's spilling over into the references section. Just put pertinent information in the street address spot. If you prefer the current version, no biggie.

| street-address = 308 Southwest Washington Street | city = [[Portland, Oregon|Portland]] | county = [[Multnomah County, Oregon|Multnomah]] | state = [[Oregon]] | zip = 97204 | country = United States

• • I prefer to leave the infobox fields alone. The last image does not interfere with the References section on my screen, but I will do some image moving to hopefully address this issue. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:34, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• Is there a way to better describe this type of soda fountain? Non-Western readers might not understand it wasn't just a typical soda fountain that you see at McDonald's. I suppose a link would help.
  • Links added to lead and article body. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• "Food Experts Divulge Their Saddest Restaurant Closure of 2016" is the only online reference not archived
  • Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• "Among salads was a Caesar variety." That's an odd way to word it
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• Link peach melba, creamsicle, and Cajun to Cajun cuisine
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• "along the best in U.S." is missing "the" and did you mean "among"
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• Some of the references use MM-DD-YYYY while others use YYYY-MM-DD
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:53, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
• Earwig is showing quotes so that's fine

Thanks for writing the article. I love visiting Triple D locations. APK hi :-) (talk) 06:12, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

• Thanks!, and same! Please let me know if you have any other concerns to address. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Cheers! APK hi :-) (talk) 04:18, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

Thanks again! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 12:06, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

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