Talk:Bitches Broken Hearts/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 17:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hey DarklyShadows, I'll review this. LOVI33 17:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Cover art needs alt text
• Are you sure the 7" cover art should be here? It is usually placed for the A-side, which I see has been done with "You Should See Me in a Crown". If you choose to keep it, it needs alt text.
• You may want to add a music, lyric or audio video to the infobox under misc using Template:YouTube.

LOVI33 The link is not working. DarklyShadows (talk) 20:18, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Thats fine, it was just a suggestion

• "The song was later released on a 7-inch vinyl along with her single "You Should See Me in a Crown"." → "The song was released on a 7-inch vinyl as a B-Side to her single "You Should See Me in a Crown"."
• "It was included" → "It was also included"
• "Eilish's lyrics on the song address" → "The lyrics of "Bitches Broken Hearts" address"
• "several topics, including the aftermath of a breakup" → "the aftermath of a breakup", no other topics are sourced

 Done

Background and release

• "was first originally released on Soundcloud on November 10, 2017." → "was originally released through Eilish's Soundcloud on November 10, 2017."
• "It was released as a single for digital download and streaming on March 30, 2018, worldwide" → "The song was later released for digital download and streaming on March 30, 2018, through Darkroom and Interscope Records."
• "The song was later released as the B-side" → "It was included as the B-side"
• ""You Should See Me in a Crown" on October 20, 2018" → ""You Should See Me in a Crown", released on October 20, 2018,"
• "It was added to the expanded edition of Eilish's debut EP, Don't Smile at Me in December 2018.[7] The song was later included on the Japanese edition of Eilish's debut studio album, When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? in December 2019.[8]" → "The song was included on the expanded edition of her debut EP, Don't Smile at Me, in December 2018, and the reissue of her debut album, When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?, the following December.[7][8]", with targets, per source
• Add source for first song to feature production from someone other than Finneas.

 Done

Composition and lyrical interpretation

• "described the track" → "described "Bitches Broken Hearts""
• "According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com → "According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com"
• "is moderately fast at" → "has a moderately fast tempo of"
• "vocals range between" → "vocals span one octave from"
• Target G₃ and G₄ to G (musical note) respectively

 Done

Reception

• "received mainly positive reviews from" → "was met with generally favorable reviews from"
• "siblings’" → "siblings'", SMOS:A&Q
• "national charts" → "official charts"
• "The track has notably been" → "The track has been"

 Done

Live performances

• Looks good!

Credits and personnel

• Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is used when there are recording locations or publishing involved
• "Credits adapted from the 7-inch vinyl liner notes." → "Credits adapted from liner notes of You Should See Me in a Crown / Bitches Broken Hearts." with target
• "co-producer" → "producer" for both, I am almost certain it is credited as this because co-producers are different from producers. If it is credited like this, remove the producers from the infobox.

 Done

Certifications

• MOS:TABLECAPTION, maybe: Certifications and sales for "Bitches Broken Hearts"

 Done

Release history

• Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION, maybe: Release dates and formats for "Bitches Broken Hearts"
• "Country" → "Region"
• "Format" → "Format(s)"
• "Label" → "Label(s)"

 Done

References

• Make sure all these are archived
• Copyvio score looks good at 31.5%
• Ref 6: cite Depop as a publisher instead.
• Ref 11: MOS:QWQ issues
• Ref 16: change to cite web and wikilink YouTube to itself

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for now. When the issues are fixed, I will promote it. Great article by the way! LOVI33 18:37, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33 That should be all. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done! DarklyShadows (talk) 20:18, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Great! Every thing looks good so thats a ✓ Pass. Congrats! LOVI33 22:43, 8 July 2020 (UTC)