Talk:Bhutan at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 11:17, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Grabbing this one for a review since I'm in an Olympics mood already. Seeing all the stuff on my Facebook history thread popping up from the London games has made me all nostalgic. Nom Comment: Same, can't wait.

• I'd throw "Bhutan, along with Chad, was one of only two nations with only female athletes at the 2012 games" into the lead somewhere. I think it's very interesting and worthy of being highlighted properly. Done; and might take to DYK if this passes as well, as it is pretty interesting
• "As of 2015, no Bhutanese athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics" - probably better off just keeping it up to date for the 2012 games, so instead say "Prior to the 2012 Summer Games, no Bhutanese athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics" Done
• "The two athletes were accompanied by their coaches; Tshering Choden for Sherab Zam and Dorji Phurba for Kunzang Choden; as well as several Bhutan Olympic Committee officials" You can drop the first names of the two athletes from the sentence, as they're already mentioned elsewhere in the paragraph. Done
• Can you throw something into the background section about the archery being held at Lords with a cite? Otherwise the information in the image caption is uncited. Added into "archery" section with cite
• Image licences fine. Thanks

I think that'll be it. Placing it on hold for the obligatory seven days. Miyagawa (talk) 11:17, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

@Miyagawa: Thanks for the review; I have addressed all your comments above. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 05:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote now that's all completed. Miyagawa (talk) 08:30, 4 August 2016 (UTC)