Talk:Better Call Saul season 6/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 216.115.233.77 in topic Lead

GA Review

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Reviewer: Newtothisedit (talk · contribs) 23:21, 29 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

I'll try to review this as soon as I can; I have a few things on my plate currently but this should be done in <2 weeks--Newtothisedit (talk) 23:22, 29 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Newtothisedit: Everything sorted on my end. The Optimistic One (talk) 11:44, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Completed spot checks on references 9,30, 49, 73 101, and 120. Great I'll pass it. Good Job!--Newtothisedit (talk) 18:11, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • I'd add in the lead how many episodes were in each half of the season. Perhaps like this "the first consisting of the first ___ episodes concluded on May 23, 2022, before resuming with the second half consisting of the final ___ episodes on July 11"
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:18, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
S6 hasn't been released on NF yet and no one knows when, or if, it will. 216.115.233.77 (talk) 06:59, 25 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Cast and Characters

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  • "In the present, he manages a Cinnabon store in Omaha under the alias Gene Takavic." I don't love the wording "in the present" maybe directly reference it being post Breaking Bad.
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "founding partner of Schweikart & Cokely." I'd change it to "founding partner of the Scweikart and Cokely law firm" to be consistent with wording of HHM in Howard's section.
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "a former student of Walter's who, during the events of Breaking Bad, works with him to produce meth" change to "works with him to produce and sell meth" given that Jesse's main task early in the partnership was selling meth
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:24, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Production

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  • "Gould did not want the season to be anticlimactic, so, to deliver a satisfactory conclusion to Better Call Saul, he brought co-creator Vince Gilligan back to the writer's room "for a good chunk of the season"" Maybe add something to denote Gilligan as Breaking Bad's creator/showrunner
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "Gould later said the season would explore if there was any way for Saul to earn redemption after all his criminal activities throughout the series" change "after all his criminal activities" to either "after all of his criminal activities" or "after his criminal activities" for correct grammar.
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "Health Safety Supervisor Rosa Estrada and Assistant Director Angie Meyer administered CPR" change to "The shows health safety supervisor ..."
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Episodes

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  • "As she leaves, Jimmy makes his signature finger-gun gesture at her." Maybe change "his" to "their", if I remember correctly Kim did the finger guns first in the season 5 finale
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:47, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Broadcast

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  • "When the sixth season was ordered in January 2020" change to "When the sixth season was ordered by AMC ..."
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • though the first two episodes premiered back-to-back on the same night" I'd change this to "with the first two episodes premiering back-to-back on the same night
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 22:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
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  • I'd add a secription of what Talking Saul in the way the Season 3 article does.
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 11:45, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • All references look good. Will do spot checks soon.

Good Article Criteria

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  • Article meets all good article criteria.