Talk:Beautiful Liar/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Gary King in topic GA Review
GA Review
edit- only publications need to be italicized in the references
- common words like "American", "English", "Spanish" don't need to be linked
- "2007 MTV Video Music Award in 2007" – kind of redundant?
- "Best-selling British Song" – add quotes around it to clarify that this is the award's name, otherwise the uppercase "Best" seems a bit out of place
Gary King (talk) 06:54, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
- The paragraph with "On February 27, 2007, "Beautiful Liar"" needs a reference. Gary King (talk) 16:07, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
Can a reference be added at the end of every paragraph (except the lead and information such as the description for the music video) just to make it perfectly clear that all of the information in the article is referenced? Gary King (talk) 03:57, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- All are sourced. Except those raised above, but were removed already. --Efe (talk) 03:07, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
Can you give the article another copyedit?
- "Knowles confirmed their duet" – "Knowles confirmed her duet"?
- "she had met Shakira several times at various awards shows over the recent years, " – "she met Shakira at awards shows over the recent years, "
- "difficulties on matching their schedules." – "difficulties matching their schedules."