Talk:Battle of Poison Spring/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 10:40, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Nice work thus far. I have a few comments:

• "Brigadier Generals John S. Marmaduke..." this occurs in the body as well
  • Done
• "black Union soldiers"
  • Done
    • Actually maybe this should be "African-American" rather than "black"? Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:10, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
      • Yeah, probably. That's the phrasing used in the rest of the article. Changed and linked. Hog Farm (talk) 04:16, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
• "Lieutenant General E. Kirby Smith" and link General officers in the Confederate States Army#Lieutenant_general
  • Done
• "winning a tactical victory of Taylor at Pleasant Hill" or "over Taylor"
  • Went with over Taylor
• "On April 9, 1864, the Thayer's Union"
  • Removed
• "Meanwhile, Price would bewas reinforced"
  • Done
• "Lack upof supplies"
  • Done
• "Williams' commanded consisted of"
  • Fixed
• "The next Confederate charge would bewas more coordinated"
  • Done
• "Writing of Poison Spring, Walker would write:"→"Walker later wrote:"
  • Done
• suggest using a convert template for 12 miles
  • Done
• are there any distances that could be added to show how far the expedition advanced etc?
  • Found a total distance number, took some digging.

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:30, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• @Peacemaker67: - All points so far addressed. Hog Farm (talk) 03:10, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:41, 12 April 2020 (UTC)