Talk:Battle of Krasos/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ErrantX (talk · contribs) 09:16, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Another pleasant Battle article! AGF on the source. Material looks fine; good flow & neutral coverage of the topic. As before very short, but neat and informative. Rather than laboriously list copyediting issues here I went through and made some incremental tweaks to the prose - just check those work. Also:

• The lead needs one sentence summarising Background and one summarising Aftermath. Just to top and tail it

That's the only issue I could see --Errant ^(chat!) 09:16, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review and the copyedits. I've rewritten and expanded the lede to better summarize the article. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 14:03, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Great; promoted :) --Errant ^(chat!) 14:10, 15 June 2012 (UTC)