Talk:Battle of Kham Duc/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 04:18, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Flagicons for the commanders would be nice, as we would like to know who they're working for.
  • I've added the flags, as you have asked.Canpark (talk) 14:41, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
• Dates on the headers splitting up the Battle section. Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 04:18, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
  • I don't quite get what your asking for here.Canpark (talk) 14:41, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
    • I meant the dates of the phases of the battle, those are sometimes seen on the headers, and they should be a made a standard feature (IMHO). Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:22, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
      • I think I have fixed that, because I'm quite slow at the moment.Canpark (talk) 07:31, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
        • Nope.
          • By 'header' do you mean the introduction??
  • Not the lede... see Talk:Second Battle of Naktong Bulge/GA1 for explanation. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:36, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
    • Okay, I had my last go at the header. Like it or leave it.
• Tell 'em what a AC-47 Spooky is. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 01:37, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
  • I have added an explanation in the second paragraph of the 'fight at Ngok Tavak' section.Canpark (talk) 06:59, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
• Words like pour down fire and spray [fire] are not acceptable, replace with fired on [with machine guns, etc.]. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:37, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
  • I have taken the opportunity to replace as many POV words as possible, including "pour down fire" and the like. It would really help if you could provide all the suggestions at one time, so I don't have to wait for a week.Canpark (talk) 07:26, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
• Passed. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 21:03, 3 April 2011 (UTC)