Talk:Battle of Fakhkh/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:24, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:24, 26 June 2020 (UTC)

• One DAB to Bayah, external links OK
  • Done
• Images properly licensed
• Put the title of El-Hibri's article in title case
  • Done
• that a general indignation arose against them This doesn't sound like you, but more like a quote. Rephrase
  • It actually was my wording :). Rephrased a bit nevertheless.
• and were left prey to the beasts awkward. perhaps something like "their bodies were abandoned to scavangers for three days" or somesuch.
  • That actually was a (rather too close) paraphrase of Veccia Vaglieri. Rephrased completely.
• Otherwise nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:48, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks Sturmvogel 66, much appreciated! Constantine ✍ 07:54, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
    • @Sturmvogel 66: a small reminder. :) Constantine ✍ 16:01, 24 July 2020 (UTC)