Talk:Battle of Edgehill/Archive 1
Latest comment: 16 years ago by EnigmaMcmxc in topic Question
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| Archive 1 |
Cleanup
I believe the article could do with being cleaned up, on several grounds:
- Poor grammar and punctuation. There are too many incomplete sentences.
- Lack of consistent narrative. The narrative keeps jumping back and forth, with successive sentences unrelated to each other
- Several POV sentences (they may be correct, but require cites).
- Insufficient context for the preliminaries.
HLGallon 06:30, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
Question
Am no exert on this subject nor the Civil war but i remember reading bits and bobs about this battle when i was a child in school (well mostly facinated by the paranormal stories surrounding this battle if one is to be honest).
Is the small line which remarks that Faithfull Fortescue cavarly unit defected to the Royalist side the action where they charged towards the royalists, during which the officer in charge fired his pistol into the ground and then they all joined ranks with the Royalists? —Preceding unsigned comment added by EnigmaMcmxc (talk • contribs) 02:01, 6 November 2007 (UTC)