Talk:Bart's Friend Falls in Love/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by GaryColemanFan in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Overall, the article looks good. No major problems stand out, although more about the Production would be nice if the information is available. As I read through (probably a section at a time or so), my concerns are:

  • The lead does not summarize the plot of the episode. I think something should be said about Bart bringing about the end of the relationship.
  • rather than repeating "is a parody of the film" in the lead, it might be better to change one to "parodies the film". I'm not too concerned about this, though.
  • Milhouse and Samantha just sit around and kiss, if I remember correctly, so calling it "making out" (especially given the definition if one clicks on the wikilink) is a bit deceptive.
  • The connection to Casablanca should be explained for those that are not familiar with the film and don't understand the parallel.
  • I can't find a reliable source that discusses the connection. This is the best we can get.
  • "Nate Meyers of Digitally Obsessed gave the episode a 4.5 rating" - out of what? I also think the site is called digitallyOBSESSED, although the capitalization of a website name isn't a big deal in a GA review.
  • No title is given for the final reference in the "References" section.
  • I'm not sure what title it can be given as episodes of The Hours do not have specific names.
  • I reverted it back to one section. The reason is that the two last paragraphs in the section are a mix of information about production and cultural references and they work better together. Theleftorium 15:51, 11 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

Other than that, everything looks fine. I will place this nomination on hold for one week. Any responses can be left here, as I have this page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 16:28, 10 September 2009 (UTC)Reply