Talk:BMW Z18/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

@X750: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Background

1. BMW Technik GmbH isn't notable enough to create an article? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
2. When BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
3. Add information about histor after BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
4. "Although first developed in 1990, the concept was not shown until 1995." - any reason why? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Design

1. "the 4.4 L (268.5 cu in) produced 355 PS (350 hp; 261 kW)" - what are "PS"? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
2. If BMW Z18 is based on BMW Z3 I would add more information about BMW Z3 and one sentence about its next generations. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Other

1. This article may be interesting for article extension. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
2. I think it's possible to find more sources in different languages, and I would try to take more information from current references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
3. Links to redirects in references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
4. I made some minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
5. What about models Z13, Z21 and Z22? Are they related in any way to Z18? From the infobox I can see BMW Z22 is a successor, but there is no any information about it in the text. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
6. Is this possible to add more categories? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
7. Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
8. @X750: It's notification. Eurohunter (talk) 16:58, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

   Hi @Eurohunter:, I think you should autofail this for now. I am busy for the next month, and I do not think I have enough time to improve this article within the allotted time period. Unless, of course, you do not mind. Your call. X750. Spin a yarn? _{Articles I've screwed over?} 06:37, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Summary

1. Fail. The article requires improvements, which will not be provided within the appropriate period. Eurohunter (talk) 14:10, 19 August 2023 (UTC)