Talk:Avoidance coping/Archive 1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Mschepker93 in topic Mschepker93 Evaluation
Archive 1


Evalutaion for Pysch. 101

This topic really just gives you a definition of what Avoidance coping is thought to be. It doesn't give you any kinds of symptoms of it or other than stress, what may cause it. Just slightly looking the topic up a bit on my own they seem to think that it could be connnected to Post Tramatic Stress Disorder. So maybe this could be merged with the article about PTSD. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KESigmund13 (talkcontribs) 17:08, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Evaluation for Pysch. 101

I thought KESigmund13 did a really nice job on her contributions. I looked at her sources and didn't find any coping or plagerism, so thats good. She added a good couple pieces of information, but there could be more information to add. This article is super short and needs to be a little bit more in depth to be helpful. I did like how she made the connection with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder and avoidance coping. She briefly mentioned PTSD sypmtoms, and I think she could have ran with that a little more, and actually talk about the symptoms, and which ones specifically lead to avoidance coping. All in all, she did very well. (Shannon Rallo (talk) 19:35, 4 October 2011 (UTC))

Mschepker93 Evaluation

You did a very good job of adding a good definition of Avoidance Coping but did not explain the topic as a whole too much. I do think that you did very, very well on the the edit. You have made an article that was absolutely nothing and told any readers what avoidance coping is. I agree with your comment above where you stated that it could be connected with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Maybe, in the future, state some similarities or run-ins in the article. Overall this was a great edit and it greatly improved the article in general. Mschepker93 (talk) 02:51, 10 October 2011 (UTC)