Talk:Attack on German Flatts (1778)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 01:03, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

• I enjoy these articles and wish to review this one. MathewTownsend (talk) 01:03, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments

background

• "He recruited a mix of Iroquois and white Loyalists estimated " - aren't Loyalists by definition not Indian. I'm not clear what "white" clarifies. Removed Magic♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
• "He began his campaigning in late May" - began his campaign? Rephrased (especially since the "late May" bit was somewhat repetitive). Magic♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
• Otherwise, all is well. MathewTownsend (talk) 20:19, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks again for reviewing, glad you enjoy them (there are more in this thread on the way). Magic♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:

   B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Provides references to all sources:

   B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Main aspects are addressed:

   B. Remains focused:

4. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)