Talk:Armaan (2003 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:11, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Non-free use rationale looks good.
• Lead looks great.
• Plot section is 341 words - passes WP:FILMPLOT
• "Siddharth dies" - how does he die?

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "dilemna" → "dilemma"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "completed later" → "completed it later"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after Mauritius.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• #Sountrack looks good.
• "in Rediff.com" → "on Rediff.com"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "earned of $296,702" → "earned $296,702"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Retitle #Critical reception into #Reception.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Then make #Critical response and #Accolades subsections.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Sources are archived.
• Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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