Talk:Arbogast & Bastian/GA1

GA Review

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Opening comments

Well written article; doesn't look like it'll need very much alteration before it can declared a good one. - Jarry1250 ^{(t, c)} 12:41, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Review

GA review (see here for criteria)

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A nice piece of work, just a couple of things to tick off.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   The lead section could do with a little expansion to cover all of the main points of the article.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   The last sentence of the article needs a cite; consider merging refs 10 and 11.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Maybe we could have a short summary of what happened 1905-1939 and 1945-1970 (just a sentence, or half of one), but only if it can be cited, of course.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   I do like the images; you might consider touching them up (or not, for that authentic look).

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Just a couple of things to fix All good

- Jarry1250 ^{(t, c)} 13:08, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Hello, Jarry1250, and thank you for taking the time to perform the GA review on this article. I believe that I have addressed all of the suggestions made in your review, with the exception of "short summary of what happened 1905-1939 and 1945-1970." Although I recognize the omission of this information is an inherent weakness in the article, I could find no information about these periods in any of the reference material available to me. I hope that these modifications meet with your approval. Alphageekpa (talk) 12:05, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Fair enough, we're only human. Duly passed, with the traditional suggestion that you go review someone else's potentially good article. - Jarry1250 ^{(t, c)} 12:44, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

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