Talk:Another Simpsons Clip Show/GA1

GA Review

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Hello. I will be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

Lead

• Fox network should be a link to Fox Broadcasting Company
• This phrase, which is also used later in the article seems like original research without a citation: "especially since clip shows tend to be among the least favorite episodes among fans"

Plot

• Episodes titles should be in quotes.

Production

• Episode title should be in quotes.

Referenced clips/Table

• Itchy and Scratchy should be italic
• "Fuzzy Bunny's Guide to You-Know-What" - this should probably be in italics rather than quotes because it was a film, correct?
• Make sure refs are in numerical order.
• It might be a good idea to add the season and episode numbers to the table.

I added the seasons. Episode numbers aren't really important. TheLeftorium 17:57, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Cultural refs

• Itchy and Scratchy needs to be italic.
• This sentence needs to be divided into two: "This comment is a sly joke about the construction of this episode, where the blackboard and couch gags are taken from other episodes, there are clips from past episodes, and the interstitials are actually clips from past episodes that feature the family members talking in the kitchen, all taking the idea of this episode being a clip show to the extreme."
• How does the episode reference The Graduate?

Also, I did some copyediting. There were quite a few typos, so watch for that in the future. This article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Please reply here when you are done. Thanks. Nikki♥311 17:05, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I think I got everything, but please take another look. :) TheLeftorium 17:57, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

There were a few things that were missed, but I took care of them. Pass. Nikki♥311 19:44, 12 January 2009 (UTC)