Talk:Always Be My Baby/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:03, 12 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• "he says he'll always be a part of her" - no contractions, please
• Choose either US (here) or U.S. (charts)
• "a record she passed in the near future" - rewmove
• "five in New Zealand, seventeen in Australia and top twenty" → number five in New Zealand, number seventeen in Australia and in the top twenty
• The second and third paragraphs should be swapped around
• Can you included the recording and release info in the article's body?

Background and recording

• You add Seal's last name in the quote, but not Dupri's. Either way, be consistent

Composition

• The two sheet music notes are quite different. I'm not sure what to do here?
• Rename section 'Composition and critical reception'

Chart performance

• Italicise Billboard
• "Always Be My Baby" stayed at two for four weeks" - number two

Official versions and remixes

• "(Da Brat would later go on to rap on remixes of "Honey" (1997), "I Still Believe" (1998), "Heartbreaker" (1999), "Loverboy" (2001), and "4real4real", an international bonus track for Carey's album, E=MC².)" - is this needed? If so, remove from brackets and reference
• "Dance remixes with re-recorded vocals were produced by David Morales and Satoshi Tomiie of Def Mix Productions. There was also a reggae remix featuring Lil Vicious." - source?
• "The US single includes a song called "Slipping Away"" - is this a B-side? If so, make this clear and add it to the infobox. Do you have a track listing?

Music video

• Does File:Alwaybemybaby.jpg really add anything to a reader's understanding?
• "The video concludes with scenes of the young boy and girl waling" - waling? really?
• Who directed the second video?

Live performances and cover version

• Remove quote marks from Rainbow World Tour and Adventures of Mimi Tou (second times)

References

• I'm not sure about Longboredsurfer.com. Is there anything else you can use?