Talk:All of the Girls You Loved Before/GA1
Latest comment: 11 months ago by Pamzeis in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Pamzeis (talk · contribs) 05:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. This is my first time reviewing a music article, so alert me if I screw anything up. Pamzeis (talk) 05:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
the song for what they deemed affectionate lyrics and
— seems kinda clunky. Maybe replace "what they deemed" with "perceived" or similar?but cancelled the
→ but canceled the (American English)"Safe & Sound (Taylor's Version)", "If This Was a Movie (Taylor's Version)"
→ "Safe & Sound (Taylor's Version)", and "If This Was a Movie (Taylor's Version)"his birthname Adam King Feeney as writer
→ his birthname, Adam King Feeney, as writerand, although Swift did not confirm the inspiration behind,[16] media publications interpreted it as a message to her then-boyfriend
— it seems pretty clunky... can it be reworded or split?all the women in his life and promises
— add a comma before "and"memorable, catchy melody
→ a memorable, catchy melodygold" an the lyrics
— typo?"breezy"[9] and The Times' Will Hodgkinson
— comma before "and"familiar and wrote that it
— comma before "and"artist with an "uninterrupted" 18-year run
— are the quote marks necessary? They feel like scare quotes to me- What makes Our Culture Mag a reliable source?
Great article overall with very minor issues. Article 
on hold now. Ping me in your replies. Pamzeis (talk) 06:27, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Pamzeis. I have addressed all of your comments accordingly :) Let me know if it needs further work. Ippantekina (talk) 08:33, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
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Second look
editEverything seems fine now! 
Passing the article. Pamzeis (talk) 14:08, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
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