Talk:All India Kashmiri Samaj

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ambar wiki in topic Comment

Comment

edit
  • "Main objectives" section needs sourcing.
  • You use the word "fighting", which seems to be inappropriate unless they have actually been engaged in warfare/terrorism/riots on a significant scale - perhaps replace with "campaigning"?
  • A wikilink is screwed up
  • External links goes at the end (although in this instance it is dead anyway)
  • Please read WP:OVERLINK yet again
  • Please read WP:MOSHEAD. You do not need to say "of the AIKS" in headings
  • "proving timely and adequate relief " - I think that you mean "providing" but in any event this is your WP:POV rather than what the source says. And the source is pretty poor
  • Are you sure that it is not "All-India"
  • The first mention of "All India Kashmiri Samaj" (ie:the opening sentence) should be bolded per WP:MOS - Sitush (talk) 08:36, 13 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
Comments were of much help and let me get to improving it before I submit it. My question is about its notability. Agree that some sources aren't top quality but believe that can be used in the article. -Ambar (talk) 10:10, 29 December 2012 (UTC)Reply