Talk:Alesta/GA1

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Latest comment: 7 years ago by TarkusAB in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 22:26, 26 December 2016 (UTC)Reply


I don't typically write/review album articles, but I will give this a try.

Lead

  • "website Cosmpolitan" - Cosmopolitan is actually an international magazine. Although this interview is published online, remove "website" and link Cosmopolitan (magazine) and italicize.

Background and Composition

  • a Romanian music camp camp - remove duplicate word
  • also being to mean --> also meaning
  • version of the album sees --> version of the album show
  • with further lettering appearing --> with lettering displayed
  • were commercialized by --> featured
  • "from other universes" - Not sure what this means. Either provide more context or consider removing
  • Romanian website Cosmopolitan --> Cosmopolitan
  • set to uptempo --> uptempo
  • with some songs being as well performed in French, Romanian and Spanish --> with some songs performed in French, Romanian and Spanish as well

Promotion

  • where she as well released --> where she also released
  • Alesta benefited of a --> Alesta embarked on a
  • last but one --> third and fourth
  • a featuring with Romanian band Havana --> featuring Romanian band Havana

Other

That's all I got! TarkusAB 22:58, 26 December 2016 (UTC)Reply