Talk:Aladdin (1992 Disney film)/GA2

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: /\\//\|_()|\| (talk) 09:32, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Agree. The article is culturally and aesthetically significant, well-written, and well sourced, and I therefore have no complaints about it. To GA status with it! /\\//\|_()|\| (talk) 09:32, 11 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

I'll be doing a full review of the article tomorrow. It's a really nice one from what I've read so far. I found one problem already though, Ref #12 (animation podcast) is a dead link and needs to be replaced. Wizardman 05:23, 23 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Here are a few issues I found, aside from the one above:

  • "since it is just a square shape, who expresses himself through pantomime - "It's sort of like acting by origami"." Quotes need cite right after.
  • The "other major themes" sentence feels like a run on, even with the dashes. Should probably be split into 3-4 sentences.

I'll put this on hold and pass when everything's fixed, which should only take a few days since there's not much. Wizardman 17:41, 23 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

Looks good now, so the article passes as a GA. Wizardman 15:31, 24 December 2009 (UTC)Reply