Talk:Al-Jarrah ibn Abdallah/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:53, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:53, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
- Tools in the toolbox all give a 404.
- Can you add a map of the Caucasus area?
- Nicely done, in general, but several MOS quibbles on your sources.
- Be consistent about using place of publication and title case.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:24, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
- Hello Sturmvogel, and thanks for taking the time! I've fixed the source formatting, and made a few minor changes there to be consistent with other articles. On the map, there is this map which I've used elsewhere, but I am not really satisfied by it, it has too few details. I'll see if I can create a better one over the weekend. Other than that, anything else, prose- or content-wise? Cheers,
- Nothing that I could see. Any map is better than none, so I'll not delay the promotion over a better one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:56, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
