Talk:Adlocutio
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editThe first paragraph has a lot of great information. It is informative and straightforward but I think you can group the information so it flows more clearly. For instance you should talk about the different contraposto all together instead of at two separate times. In the first sentence the part "and a general form of salute from the..." seems redundant since you already addressed it earlier in the sentence. The sentiment "The right hand, by the Hellenistic period..." is a run on sentence. There is a typo in "The bare feet of Augustus may seems" change to seem. The Augustus section was very informative but contains a few typos. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maria416 (talk • contribs) 01:17, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
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