Talk:Abu'l-Aswar Shavur ibn Fadl/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 2 April 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:27, 2 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links OK
  • daughter and her treasure ad retinue
  • Fix the title case in Bosworth.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
As usual, thanks for the review, Sturmvogel 66. Other than the purely technical stuff, how did it read? It is the first article I write on the area in this period of history, and given its relative obscurity I'd like to have some feedback on whether the context is enough for the uninitiated. Constantine 12:47, 18 April 2015 (UTC)Reply
I thought it was fine, but I'm a little more knowledgeable about the Byzantines than I am about the Arabs on who you normally write, so I may not be a typical reader.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:56, 18 April 2015 (UTC)Reply