Talk:A Rugrats Chanukah/GA1

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Reviewer: CTJF83 chat 21:02, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

• What makes this episode a special? Is it because it is Chanukah related, or is it just 1 - half hour story, instead of 2 - 15 minute stories?
  • Both I believe. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• "The babies listen and place themselves as the people featured in the story." This just doesn't read right to me. Perhaps remove "themselves as the people" or something like "...listen and pretend they are the people featured in the story".
  •  Done The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• "rededicate themselves into the Holy Temple" is "into" a grammar error, or is there some Jewish ceremony where into is the appropriate word?
  • Changed to inside. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• The first sentence in the 2nd paragraph is a long run-on and needs to be broken down.
  • Broke down. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• Is there any specific reason given as to why the VHS was pushed back to '98? If not, it's not a big deal
  • Not that any source says. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• It says CBS broadcast it at 8:30 pm, is this Eastern time?
  • The magazine doesn't give any specific zone, but since it's from Charleston, West Virginia, I'm going to have to say yes. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• When it says it is one of the most popular episode, the reference is a Jewish book. Possible conflict of interest? Also, does it give a reason why they say the episode is popular, being a Jewish book, are they saying it is popular among Jews, or everyone?
  • They're saying it's one of the most critically acclaimed episode of the series, which from the review, you can see is accurate. I think the claim is actually researched so it isn't a conflict of interest. The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
    • If they are saying "critically acclaimed" instead of popular, you should change that. CTJF83 chat 22:33, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
      • • Paraphrasing a bit, the book says "Two of the most popular Rugrats episodes focus on Jewish holidays." It just says that they are among the most popular episodes of the series. The Flash ^{talk} 22:52, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• ...."compared to that of newer Rugrats episodes, was 'plenty of dirt and some digital artifacts'." What does he mean plenty of dirt?
  • Unsure, how do you want me to clear it up? The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
    • Reading the reference, it looks like he is saying the episode doesn't look good on DVD, with some distortion. Perhaps it should be removed then, because he is judging the quality on DVD, not the episode as a whole. CTJF83 chat 22:33, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
      •  Done The Flash ^{talk} 22:50, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
• Having nothing to do with this article, for the TV Guide top holiday specials, is The Simpsons episode "Simpsons Roasting on an Open Fire" listed at all?
  • I think so, I'll have to check though... The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)
    • Nope, just checked. The Flash ^{talk} 22:20, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

Overall, another great job! CTJF83 chat 22:04, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! :) The Flash ^{talk} 22:16, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

Not a problem, passing CTJF83 chat 23:02, 9 November 2009 (UTC) CHEESE!