Talk:ATK (football club)/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:19, 9 January 2016 (UTC)
- "In early 2014, it was announced that the All India Football Federation" - month is necessary, because a year is too long to keep "Early 2014".
- being purchased for 18 crore. - the US dollar one needed
- The USD is not in the source. I will look for a 2014 exchange rate from a reliable source '''tAD''' (talk) 20:37, 24 January 2016 (UTC)
- I am not a mathematician, but I calculated it at $2.99 million. As you are from India, does that sound right to you? I think I will round it to $3 million to make it presentable '''tAD''' (talk) 20:41, 24 January 2016 (UTC)
- "had won the bidding" - "the bid"
- "The club then signed" - then? It is a new section
- " Atlético de Kolkata selected seven players" - I think the sentence is wrong because the club had to sign seven players- no more no less
- "relations between the Bengali people of India and Bangladesh." - between East Bengal (Bangladesh) and West Bengal " looks better and it is what the link says
- the link does not says that Hume scored the team's first hat-trick
- Done (reworded) '''tAD''' (talk) 20:37, 24 January 2016 (UTC)
- " Bidhannagar City part of Kolkata" - why city capital? Also it should be "Bidhannagar, on the outskirts of Kolkata"
- Most of the players are now playing for other clubs - so either it should be altered or the section heading should be changed to 2015 squad.
- I will make it say it is the 2015 squad. The ISL and ATK websites have not been updated since then. If you know from Indian news and media which players have left, you are allowed to update (small changes can be made by reviewers). However, if most of the domestic players have returned to the I-League and the squad is now decimated, I think it would look more presentable to keep it as the 2015 squad '''tAD''' (talk) 20:47, 24 January 2016 (UTC)