Talk:A9 (Croatia)/GA1
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Reviewer: InTheAM (talk · contribs) 13:31, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
Well-written edit
The article is well-written. There are only minor fixes needed:
- The dashes and hyphens need to be made consistent. Some places use hyphens where dashes should be.
- In the rest area list, the notes column would read better if they were set up like this: "There are x, y, and z at the XYZ rest stop."
- The lead is good.
Factually accurate and verifiable edit
The article is well-referenced, and the sources seem reliable.
Broad in its coverage edit
The article has a couple issues regarding detail and missing information.
- The Route description has too much detail about interchanges and roadways that cross the A9 and not enough about the actual route. The interchange details need cut back and a proper description of A9's route needs added.
- The rest of the sections are good.
Neutral edit
The article is mostly written in a neutral point of view.
- However, in the Notable structures section, the phrases "particularly noteworthy" and "most significant" are problematic. It can be fixed by explaining why they are notable/significant. Are they the longest, biggest, most expensive, etc.?
Stable edit
- The article appears stable.
Images edit
- Images are all tagged with copyright status and/or fair-use rationale.
- The captions leave a little to be desired. I think they need some detail. For example, the one only says "The A9 Motorway."
I will put the review on hold for 7 days while these issues are addressed. InTheAM 19:03, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking time to review this article. I think that your comments are helpful and constructive in respect of improving the article and I'll try to address the issues raised here in a day or two, or within the 7 day period at the latest.--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:47, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
I was out of town over the weekend and just now got to see your changes. I'll look at it today and tomorrow and get back to you. InTheAM 20:40, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
Good job. I'm listing it as GA. InTheAM 01:58, 7 December 2011 (UTC)