Talk:A.N.T. Farm/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by SNUGGUMS in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 02:25, 1 September 2020 (UTC)Reply


Auto-fail: I'm afraid this has a long way to go before it is broad enough in coverage to meet criterion#3 of the WP:Good article criteria. No reviews from critics are included, which is a glaring omission, and another big problem is how the article doesn't go into filming details. Is it known why this only ran for three seasons? I'd also go into that if possible. Looking into the prose, "crush" isn't really the best tone to use when talking about characters being attracted to anybody, "unrequited and non-mutual" is redundant (just use one term or the other). Avoid using contractions unless part of a quote or title. As for referencing, every paragraph should end with at least one in-text citation (I see multiple instances of unsourced content). Sorry, but this was nominated for GA very prematurely. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 02:25, 1 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

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