Talk:660 Fifth Avenue/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:39, 10 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Follow MOS:ORDER and add alt text to every image.
  • "Fifth Avenue were" → "Fifth Avenue was"
  • "been be" - typo?
  • "surrounded the atrium on all sides" → "surrounded the atrium"
  • "of –th's lobby, along" - reword and remove the comma after "lobby".
  • Don't use colons in the sentence starting with "another advantage".
  • "work site" should be written as one word (both times).
  • "to paid off" → "to pay off"
  • Add a serial comma after "Colony Capital".
  • "demanding investigation" → "demanding an investigation"
  • "April2017" → "April 2017"
  • "half of required" → "half of the required"
  • Add a hyphen between "two thirds".
  • "Brookfield announced as a $400 million renovation" - reword
  • "During 2011" → "In 2011"
  • "campm" - typo?
  • "Dr Raven Sable" → "Dr. Raven Sable"
  • Wall Street JournalThe Wall Street Journal
  • Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with "|url-access=subscription".
  • Wikilink reports from The New York Times who have wiki-articles.
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:55, 12 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
    Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks. I have done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 12 July 2021 (UTC)Reply