Talk:590 Madison Avenue/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:24, 25 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Move the short description to the top of the article.
  • "for technology company IBM" → "for the technology company IBM"
  • "The building is shaped as" → "The building is shaped like"
  • "with air conditioning system" → "with an air conditioning system"
  • "It contains a 11-ton boulder" → "It contains an 11-ton boulder"
  • Add a hyphen between "gray green".
  • "At the building's chamfer and at" → "At the building's chamfer and"
  • Wall Street JournalThe Wall Street Journal
  • That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:59, 25 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
    Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks. I've done them all. Epicgenius (talk) 00:12, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply