Talk:550 Madison Avenue/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Serial comma after "37-story office tower".
• "that classical buildings" → "classical buildings"
• Add a hyphen between "half barrel".
• Remove the comma after "additional floor area".
• "bare inn decoration" - reword.
• Remove the comma after "Grand Central Terminal".
• "To save time and to limit" → "To save time and limit"
• "Johnson/Burgee were" → "Johnson/Burgee was" (company)
• "renovated during 2008" → "renovated in 2008"
• "amenities was" → "amenities were"
• Check for citation ordering issues everywhere in the article.
• Wall Street Journal → The Wall Street Journal
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The Real Deal New York with "|url-access=subscription".
• Wikilink David W. Dunlap, Aline B. Saarinen ("Louchheim"), Ada Louise Huxtable, Paul Goldberger, and Christopher Gray.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Thanks. I've done most of these. For the serial comma, I split it into 2 sentences as that was only a list of 2 items, and the annex no longer exists. As for Louchheim, I can't find her name here. Epicgenius (talk) 22:22, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

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