Talk:2009 Emirates Cup/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic Summary

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

Taking on the review of this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Summary

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  • "and he nearly made goalkeeper Grégory Coupet pay" - might want to reword the last part of this piece of text slightly so it is more formal.
  • Wikilink Atlético Madrid the first time it's mentioned
  • "and ex-Arsenal player" - former
  • "when substitute Andrey Arshavin volleyed in from a cross" - Mention the player that executed the cross that allowed Arshavin to score
  • "Germán Pacheco equalised for Atlético from a counter" - I didn't understand what is meant by counter. That will need clarifying.
  • "defensive mistake" - this should be spelt as a defensive error

That is all from me. All references are in order. Going to put this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: thanks for taking a look at this, got all corrections I believe. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:09, 26 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
{{ping|Lemonade51} Good work. Now promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 26 December 2017 (UTC)Reply