Talk:2007 AT&T 250/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will be taking on this review and expect comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background edit

  • "It returned to the schedule in 1993 and had been on the schedule every year" - reptition of schedule
  • "Wimmer, who entered the race with three consecutive top-five finishes and five consecutive top-tens," - same issue as above
  • "David Reutimann, Regan Smith, Greg Biffle, Marcos Ambrose, Bobby Hamilton Jr., and Jason Leffler rounded out the top ten." - you're missing David Ragan from this sentence.

Practice and qualifying edit

  • It would be helpful to the general reader to have the knowledge what the fastest lap times set by Scott Wimmer were

Race edit

  • The 250-lap race began at 8:00 p.m. EDT, televised live on ESPN2." - The 250-lap race began at 8:00 p.m. EDT, and was televised live in the United States on ESPN2.
  • These two sources [1] [2] would help to clarify some major points in this sub-section like why Hamlin could not land in the infield and which of Edwards' tire went flat and how that came to be

Post-race comments edit

  • Wikilink ESPN and do the same in the lead

References edit

  • Refs 7 and 20 lead to a 404 page and will need archiving.

Overall quite the well-written article we have here. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:05, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Done all. Let me know if there is anything else or if you have an article you would like me to review. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 20:37, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Bcschneider53: There's nothing else that needs rectifying so I can now pass this review. MWright96 (talk) 21:09, 19 February 2018 (UTC)Reply